Not what I wanted

Not what I wanted

8 week online workshop
lesson 3
lines and colors

I took these photos thinking that they would be so much better .

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I am a mom of two boys. Oscar 4 and Thomas 7 months We've been back in Australia for 12 months before that England.


  1. Hi Deb, what is it about these that you don’t like? I’d be interested to hear that before I give you my feedback.

  2. The one of Oscar I’ve cut his fingers But otherwise it’s not that bad . The one of Thomas I just did because I’d done one like that of Oscar so I don’t feel any love Towards it I don’t think.

    • So you already know what I would have said 🙂 The cut off fingers were what bothered me too. Other than that I love how you’ve framed their faces and used colour. This exercise is worth practicing some more until you get photos you love.

  3. I think the color is great and it would be worth going back and trying again if you can. I know it’s so hard to focus on the photos when you’re also watching two little ones. If you could see all of his fingers, I think it’d be a really cute shot. The coloring of Oscar’s photo is really nice.

  4. This is a really cute idea. I love the colours and the idea of them looking through the gap. Their faces are nice and clear, too. I think you should do it again, too. Sometimes it takes me a couple of tries to execute what I see in my head.

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